Heylo Folks,
Back again with another episode to fulfil my weekly readers hearts with glee (I hope.)
This week, not only did a majority of the H3W Crew help me out with this, but Jim Stitzel and Angel (Hawty BcBloggy) both joined in for the fun. Angel was kind enough to lend us her Recon skillz and we got to film with the constantly sought after special armor permutation. Very cool stuff.
The text quality on this one isn’t great, but it will be better next week. This one has all the characters in it except the Doctor (and Dorian), so expect a segment for each. There’s a pretty big reveal in this one, one that you might have peiced together thus far.
Hope ya like it!
Peace,
Adam Susskind
Nice job! I really like the way this comic is turning out. A few typos here and there, but it's to be expected. Amazing work!
Thanks so much man, it means a lot to me!
Awesome, already Guessed Dorian wasn't real.
Two things though, no…three, no wait, it is two.
1) Was page 12 meant to be blank down one side?
2) Are we going to see the Ghost Two Sequence next episode?
Yup, 12 was half blank, and yea the GT Axel sequence will be in ep. 15
This is really nice, Adam. I particularly enjoyed your writing in this chapter. It felt like it really pushed the story forward.
I have to cringe at your use of time travel, since personally I feel like it's an overused trope in writing. My advice is to tread carefully with it. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you don't abuse the mechanic.
And your setting the saint on fire as its way of physical interaction was inspired. That was a beautiful technique.
That turned out great. It's fascinating witnessing the behind the scenes work and then comparing it to the final product. It was fun participating in this! Great job.
Hey Angel, thanks for visiting, your help was great
Hey look! It's me!
(Yes, I always have the short, dimwitted comment. The reason is because anything I would have to say would basically be repeating whatever the people before myself have already said.)
Hey, it's HJ, king of the land of the DEAD.
That's… Actually quite clever! I never thought of that.
That means I'm now a king of the Zombies. My zombie hordes will be the scourge of the everything, and I will conquer the world in the name of Bungie. I will them have my undead horde of minions build a giant slingshot, or something.
oh no not the giant sling shot of doom
Hey sorry for the late response. I'm glad you liked it. As far as time travel goes, don't worry. It isn't going to be a major theme in the story, but it does explain some things. You'll see. Nothing to worry about.
i get confused about time travel real easy but i'll try to get through it as a dedicated fan of the series
ok this is as best as i can say it (time travel confuses me no matter how it's explained though it's gotten easier since i played timeshift)
either a still loyal follower of dorian survived what twill happen and waited for the right time and goes into the past when the technology is around or a agent from the future tried to kill doiran and got exposed to sancturol and since he knows everything that happened he is trying to prevent it. and the half blank page might be because the agent went back in time to stop disk from jumping because he failed to save her the first time so he goes back to that page and that's what is on the other side of the page.and i'll post the rest of my theories later.
P.S. i've almost got the first issue done the title iof the comic is HALO: Comics Evolved(tell me if it's good or not)and the first issue is going to be issue 0 prolouge.
and to Karl:lol
P.S.S. i'm posting this from my mom's classroom awesome it's not blocked:-)
P.S.S.S. i was right about most of that!??!/!?!!??!?!?!?!? holy cow that's a surprise
Ha, yea you got some things right there. I can't wait to see your comic a bit more. The time travel issue won't become a, well, you know, an issue. I'm going to be really careful with it all…
the next page is about reach so i might not word it right(seeing as i don't have the book) so i'm trying to be careful what i say so i don't get anything wrong
A wise choice.
in the mean time watch the new machinima that i found called spriggs