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Episode 1: Inside Looking Out

"Shocking?" she asks.

"A bit," I say. I'm trying to act like I saw this coming from a mile
away. This conversation has gone nowhere for over four hours, and her pretty face has been framed in that doorway for the entire thing. She
doesn't seem to have any answers either. I stammer for a moment, "I..."

"You don't know what to say."

"Right."

There's a long silence and, looking more than a little dejected, she
eventually walks away. A clumsy conversation. I hear the radio
tap on, a light click, from the other room.

She's soft spoken and warm, smells like-... Something nice. I've never
been one for poetry. Heck if I know how I became the luckiest man in
the whole damncity. I love that woman like air and food and Synth.

I fog up the inside of my helmet with my heavy breathing. A timer goes
off somewhere internally. Time to haul my ass into bed and remember to
forget for a few hours. Sleep hits me like a freight train, and the
rest of the night flies past so fast that I'm snapping my piece to my
leg before I even start to think about dreaming.

I'm a crap cop with a crap job on the bottom level of City 23 who
enjoys the the protection of a gun because he's afraid of just about
everybody.

But I've got good reason to be.

My name is Sam Stone, my wife Katherine was killed just two weeks ago,
and I just spent the afternoon with her.

EOR One: Inside Looking Out

By Adam Susskind on October 3rd, 2009

Heyo,

Here’s a little taste, this won’t be going on Bungie quite yet, nor is it the official first day of the series. Just enjoy at your leisure ;D

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The_Catfish

October 3, 2009 at 3:23 PM | Permalink | Reply

Nice opener, gripping story already. Really like to see where this goes.
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 3, 2009 at 3:42 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Oh, and when it goes, it goes! You'll see
JRCB

October 3, 2009 at 5:04 PM | Permalink | Reply

Quite an interesting opener there. Really interested in this. Any idea on how often these will come out?
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 3, 2009 at 6:01 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Well, once I get into real production, three episodes a week on mon, wed, and fri ;D
  - Jim (TTL Demag0gue)
    
    October 4, 2009 at 1:38 PM | Permalink | Reply
    
    Hey, don't be stealing my schedule, bro.
    
    Thief.
    - Adam Susskind
      
      October 4, 2009 at 2:02 PM | Permalink | Reply
      
      Today, your schedule, tomorrow Fort Knox!
Nick Petromilli

October 3, 2009 at 2:16 PM | Permalink | Reply

Great start! read it over though, theres one mistake when he says "im a crap a cop"? Didn't seem right. Other than that, lovin it so far. Keep up the good work!
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 3, 2009 at 3:42 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Oops, thanks. I didn't get anyone to spell check this for me. Ill go fix that. ;D
Jim (TTL Demag0gue)

October 4, 2009 at 1:37 PM | Permalink | Reply

A little film noir effect, eh?
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 4, 2009 at 2:04 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  I said I'd do it. ;D It'll be tough to distinguish characters from each other, so I may change the filter a bit. The whole story is pretty pulpy, but not so much bad-ass as in the last one. In fact, none of that at all.
Juesoni

October 4, 2009 at 3:48 PM | Permalink | Reply

Interesting. Very interesting. Well, you've got my read. I like the look, but you'd run out of character perms pretty quickly with the limits of color…

*Bookmarks*
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 4, 2009 at 3:52 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you're interested. You're right about the color issue. Ill have to come up with some way around it. I may end up altering the filter somewhat to allow for color.
  - JustinBraun
    
    October 4, 2009 at 5:05 PM | Permalink | Reply
    
    You could always just partially desaturate the image to keep some of the color, but still end up with the darker look.
ChadPurzycki

October 5, 2009 at 1:43 AM | Permalink | Reply

yay your alive and you bring epicness!
- Adam Susskind
  
  October 6, 2009 at 10:44 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Indeed. This series is gonna be the teh hotness ;D
Nick Petromilli

October 7, 2009 at 12:35 AM | Permalink | Reply

Teh very hotness, kinda like this—> http://www.couchpotatofilms.com/Media/wallpaper/T...
Nick Petromilli

October 7, 2009 at 12:35 AM | Permalink | Reply

Teh very hotness, kinda like this—> http://www.couchpotatofilms.com/Media/wallpaper/T...
Nick Petromilli

October 7, 2009 at 12:36 AM | Permalink | Reply

Teh very hotness, kinda like this—> http://www.couchpotatofilms.com/Media/wallpaper/T...
Nick Petromilli

October 7, 2009 at 12:37 AM | Permalink | Reply

Teh very hotness, kinda like this.

http://www.couchpotatofilms.com/Media/wallpaper/T...
- Qwerty
  
  October 28, 2009 at 1:39 AM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Stormtroopers PONE!
Kraken

January 6, 2010 at 6:34 PM | Permalink | Reply

Is it just me or have I seen this story in a machinima somewhere?
Adam Susskind

January 6, 2010 at 7:40 PM | Permalink | Reply

Yup. I had made one several weeks back.
topgun

January 7, 2010 at 2:02 AM | Permalink | Reply

awesome
Adam Susskind

January 7, 2010 at 2:04 AM | Permalink | Reply

Glad you like it.
xSOB a DooBy

January 7, 2010 at 3:25 AM | Permalink | Reply

This is nice, too bad we won't be seeing any more When do we get to read the novel??? Because that is a bitch of a cliffhanger :'(
- Adam Susskind
  
  January 7, 2010 at 9:00 PM | Permalink | Reply
  
  Thanks brotha, the book will be out before 2011, I'll let everyone know. It has a great story.
ChadPurzycki(Grey)

April 5, 2010 at 6:35 PM | Permalink | Reply

om nom nom

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